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My tongue is a weapon
Sharp as a blade

My mind is a tool
You best be afraid

I've practiced my skills
And mastered my arts

I dare you to attack me
I'll tear you apart

My love is my armor
My strength is my shield

In the past, you've won battles
But I've long since healed

So when we meet again I'll be ready
This time I will win

I'm ready to stand up
And bring out the fighter within
<3
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OtakuFangirl1200 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That was a powerful and inspiring piece of literature. Love this poem.
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Pikku-Rotta Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014   Writer
Don't like the last lines, but othervice it's almost perfekt. Just brilliant.
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eatingpineapples Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Unf, awesome poem. It's like "Bitch Please", only a poem LOL
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King-Doodles Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh oh... :D
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skyblupink Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy $h!t . I wouldn't mess with THAT. :ninja:
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MasterRUSSIA624 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very inspiring. :) i love it! FAVE!!
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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SuperSeaxxyCupcake Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Fantastic! *claps* Very inspiring!
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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SuperSeaxxyCupcake Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
*two thumbs up*
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pre-heresyKharn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
headline-news: little miss badass strikes again, putting ink to paper and proving the pen is just as mighty as the sword and twice as persuasive.

:thumbsup:
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww :3 Thanks!!
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
*clap clap* you go, girl!
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monkeys1395 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
wow thats 2 good poems that i have seen from u

are u like a poet or going to be a poet in the world outside of the deviantart world
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)

It's just a hobby and way of expression for me :)
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IronArmy Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've wrote a few poems myself, but they don't seem to have the same feel that you get across here. It's beautiful in it's own way!
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sure they're amazing in their own way! <3 Comparing your work to other people always makes us feel like ours is worse xD
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:iconironarmy:
IronArmy Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
as someone I don't remember said "Comparison is the thief of joy"
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:iconlostgirl23:
lostgirl23 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
awesome poem! It has a geat massage! "never give up no matter how tough the challenge" you're so inspiring! :D
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, thank you!
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:iconlostgirl23:
lostgirl23 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
anytime! I'm always there for every one
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Rectoe7 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student General Artist
I am absolutely in love with this.
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3
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Rectoe7 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem ^~^
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DanielC-124 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist
This is really good!
I was so happy to see more of your poems in my watch messages today! :squee:
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Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww :D Thanks!
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DanielC-124 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist
No problem! :saddummy:
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SinnerInTheRain Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
it tells a great story...i imagined you clad in shining armor fighting off an army of homophobes and racists represented by foul demons...and then maybe a final battle with a large dragon...most likely your parents or some such thing
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Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahha I love your interpretation! Thank you!
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Julma-Satu Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is very beautiful =) I love it.
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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cutewooper Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love your poems so much! They're amazing and just... I'm so jealous they're so perfect!
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Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so much!
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cutewooper Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
<3 never a problem!
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Tiffersinger Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Love the poem. It's so well written. I could actually picture it in my head.
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Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3
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solitaire-de-blaze Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
"The worm has turned, gentlemen!"
-- The Soldier; Team Fortress 2

I love your words
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:iconplaid-rose:
Plaid-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! <3
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